Magazine Story or Article Review (up to 1000 words)
This will include proofreading for spelling, grammar and typographical errors, general suggestions on rephrasing and plot line questions.
$
30.00
Order one of the listed critiques using the Paypal cart or contact me using the contact page on my website. Tell me what you are interested in. Please include any particular questions you wish addressed in your email and inform me if there is a specific time that you need the critique back by. If I cannot complete the critique by the date you need it, I will inform you and not take on the assignment. Once we have agreed on the assignment, I will send you an electronic invoice via email.
Payment is required before I begin working on your manuscript. Payment is accepted through PayPal with either a PayPal account or major credit card. No refunds will be issued once I begin doing your critique as you are paying for my time and cannot give that back to me. If you are unsatisfied with your critique in any way, I will attempt to address reasonable concerns with a follow up email.
All critiques are done electronically and must be submitted as a .doc file, double-spaced, Times New Roman 12 pt font. Standard submission format.
Payment is required before I begin working on your manuscript. Payment is accepted through PayPal with either a PayPal account or major credit card. No refunds will be issued once I begin doing your critique as you are paying for my time and cannot give that back to me. If you are unsatisfied with your critique in any way, I will attempt to address reasonable concerns with a follow up email.
All critiques are done electronically and must be submitted as a .doc file, double-spaced, Times New Roman 12 pt font. Standard submission format.
Non-rhyming Picture Book Manuscript Review (up to 1000 words)
This will include proofreading for spelling, grammar and typographical errors, an in depth analysis of the plot line, language, character development and pacing with suggestions on how to improve them. I will also send you a picture book dummy template so that you may evaluate page turns, picture possibilities and length factors..
$
60.00
Mid-grade or YA Novel Review (first 30 pages)
This will include proofreading for spelling, grammar and typographical errors. It will also include an analysis of the plot line, character
development and scenes with notes on how to improve them. You must include a one-page synopsis of the entire book with the chapters.
Additional pages—contact me for a price quote.
development and scenes with notes on how to improve them. You must include a one-page synopsis of the entire book with the chapters.
Additional pages—contact me for a price quote.
$
90.00
References
"I've often heard an editor compared to a physician. A doctor must first make a diagnosis. That’s what Roxanne did with my manuscript. Advice followed. First a major improvement. Then a minor setback. More advice. Voila! A healthy manuscript was born--and then sold! Her diagnosis was targeted for my particular manuscript and follow-up care was consistent. This could also be your remedy!"
—Gay Seltzer
—Gay Seltzer
"Roxanne offers thorough and thoughtful manuscript critiques. She points out strengths and weaknesses and provides precise suggestions about how to improve writing. Her comments are detailed and clear. She reviews manuscripts with the eye of an enthusiastic reader and a skillful writer."
—Ellen L. Ramsey
"Roxanne's critique was thorough. She made suggestions I would have never thought of. She also pointed out my
story's strengths, so I was able to see what was working and what wasn't.”
—Alison Dixon
"Thank you for the very thorough critique. Your input was invaluable."
—Jennifer Masson
"I can't thank you enough for all the work you put into my story. I appreciated your organization and professionalism.
You also work in a timely fashion."
—Donna Zappala